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In present, more and more information is appeared and we call it "information explosion". Generally speaking, it will more convenient to us for more information we can get. There are ample example can demostrate the point. For example, when we travel to a city we want to find a hotel to have a rest, or a store to buy some food, in this moment, we need lot of information about the hotel and store, after comparing the details and we choose one. However, a wealth of information can bring us a poverty of attention, to which I can not agree more. The information could help us to resolve some problems, and the information could distracted me by offering irrelevant information. Take the shopping for example, when you want buy something by internet agency, you write the key words and find the goods. But many products are appearing at the same time, with different characteristics or types. It is easily to distracted us to find the true goods that we truly want to buy. So, we can conclude that, the information have the both sides of effects to us: let us convenient or distracted.
