正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend.His name is John.He is very tall.He is a lovely boy with big eyes and small mouth. He is very clever.He can play the piano well.He has learnt a lot of music instruments.He can also play the violino. He likes sports very much.We often play basketball on Sunday. We are best friends forever.