小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog.My dog is named Dudu.He is fat and eat much everyday. My dog is 9 years old.I like to play with him if I have some time.DUdu is a white dog and he had big black eyes.Dudu is so cute and he know how can make me happy.So I will get some presents to him.