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How to make living conditions better never fails to capture people's attention thoughtout much of the human history,human beings use science and technology to make the earth better place which benefits human beings a lot alongside will definitely have negative effect on the environment and animals species. Some people hold the standpoint that its too late to protect the plants and animals,as some chemical compositions have brought permenent damage to the environment.however, the technology we use today is not capable of improving the current situation,if we want to heal the earth ,at least make it as beautiful as it used to be.it would be very difficult .Nevertheless,other people think there is something we can do to help .better the world,with the help of development of modern tehnology,its reasonable to hold the strong conviction that human are capable of handling the problem. in my view,efficient measures can be and will be taken to deal with the environment problem.Human activities do cause some serious damage to the plants and animals,but with proper measure,the living conditions will became a better place for both human and other creatures to live.
