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2011年4月2日雅思大作文真题:飞机旅行是否应当廉价

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:37浏览次数:7705
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【题目要求

Many people think cheap air travel should been couraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads toenvironmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views andgive your own opinion.


【题目翻译】

很多人认为我们应当鼓励廉价的飞机旅行,因为它给了普通人远行的自由。然而,另外一些人则认为这会导致环境问题,因此飞机旅行应当更加昂贵,以便减少人们的使用。谈论双方观点更给出你自己的观点。

【关键词分析】

cheap air travel

本题不是简单的飞机旅行的利与弊,而是问飞机旅行是否应当廉价。

话题分类与题型

本题是旧题,与2008年6月14日的考题完全相同,与2010年4月10日(见下)的考题也几乎一致。属于科技类与环保类的混合话题,题型为Discursive(Argumentation)。值得一提的是,最近考老题的次数较多,上一次考试(2011年3月19日)的考题与2008年11月15日的完全相同,因此提醒各位考生一定要重视对历年考题的复习。有意思的是,今天欧洲考区的话题同样是科技类与环保类的混合题型,同样是2008年的考过的旧题。题目是科技改变农产品产量与质量的利弊(详见本文最后)。

话题评价

环保类写作话题题库中有一个小分支是关于“交通工具”的。从2003年至今,这个分支话题共出现8次,其中2次是问汽车的利弊,6次飞机是否应该被限制(其余4道话题见下)。这些话题的基本思路都是相同的,缺点主要从环保角度去考虑。当然每个话题有不同的侧重点,同学需要认真对待。

类似真题

1.   Some people think the recent increase in cheap airtravel brings benefits, while other people think it has drawbacksto the environment and the world's resources. Discuss both viewsand give your opinion. (100410)

2.   Some people believe that air travel should berestricted because it causes seriouspollutionand uses up the world’s fuel resources. To whatextent do you agree or disagree? (060218)

3.   One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a caruses in several years’ time, but theycausethe same amount of pollution. So some people thinkthat we should discouragenon-essential flights, such as tourist travel,rather than to limit the use of cars. To what extentdo you agree or disagree? (060325,080405)

【结构与思路】

本文属于Discuss both views and give youropinion题型,因此双方的观点必须都提及,缺一不可。但是结论上未必要折中,如果要支持一方的话,则选择驳斥另外一方即可。 

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;作者词汇表达较丰富,学术词汇词汇使用准确,但要避免拼写出错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

With the development of our society economy , more and more people would trend to choose go a long distance place by flight. As a result , some people point out that cheap air travel should been encouraged for making people have more freedom to travel further. However, others think that it would leads to the environment problems, so a more expensive charge in the air travel can discourage people from having it. It is commomly believe that the development of transportation in flight has been enormously change people's life and gives people so much convenience.Due to the convenience and increaseingly cheaper flight fee , citcizens in China can travel to US to have a beautiful vacation. Besides, the people who are busy with the business also gain enormous benefits from the cheap air travel because they have to travel a long distance to accomplish their businesss . Compared with the past the air travel was belong to the rich ,the ordinary people can also provide the cost flight travel because the cheap air travel and the average level of income have been raised .So some people believe that should encourage to extend the cheap air travel to provide more people from having chance to enjoy the flight development . However others think that the cheap air travel also would caused the environment problems in term of the global warming and air pollutions due to the long distance flight consumes a large of fuel . It is also a great headache for the government concern about how to make a banlance between the human desire to have a cheaper cost in the flight travel and the increasingly worse environment problem . To sum up, Although the environment problems maybe caused by the cheap air travel ,it should be admitted that we should provide people cheaper price in air travel because the contemporary society' requirment .And we can make a more progress in flight design such as how to deign a better flight focus on how to consume fewer fuel and prevent the flight from discharging waste gas .

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