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写作思路：
第一段：背景介绍
第二段：优点：
1. 公平：不是每个纳税人都要为博物馆做贡献
2. 补充运营经费
3. 不会威胁其他独立的竞争对手
第三段：缺点
1. 导致减少参观者，影响文化和知识的传播
2. 剥夺贫穷孩子的受教育机会
第四段：结论
建议措施：学生免费，贫穷家庭补助，免费的虚拟博物馆
词汇拓展：
Introduce 推行（政策）
Proposal 建议=suggestion n.
maintenance 维护 n.
expansion 扩大
grant 批准
residential building 住宅楼
Operation 运营
spending 支出=cost
security 安保
collection 收藏品
financial support 经济支持
taxpayer 纳税人
admission 门票
compensate 补偿
subsidy 津贴
substantially 非常=greatly
venue 地方=place
access 进入
vivid 生动的
presentation 展示
undermine 消弱=impair
inspiration 启示
cultural heritage preservation 文化遗产保护
transmission 传播
be deprived of 剥夺
Accordingly 因此=therefore
preference treatment 优惠待遇
promising 有希望的
option 选择=choice
well-off 贫穷的=poor
adverse impacts 负面影响
文章学术词汇表达灵活，还要注意词汇拼写的检查；可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
recently, the museum produced by the goverment introducedd some proposal to maintenance the museum toidy and clear so grant a free gallery for people.this proposal have generated debat among the ciizens . some citizens think that it is fair attributed to not everyone have the responsibilities to contribute to the museums. it will complementary the operating free and it will undermine the oppentont the competitor. some people think that these proposalmay have bad effect on yontg people.they are worried about it will decrease the visitiors of the museum lead to the culture s diffuse. besides,that people who came from poor family will can,t afford the pay for the museum . in my opinion,the students should be free and subsidies for poor families and advocate positive values .after all ,most people disapprove of the idea of charge the money from the museum
