2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is a great place.I live in the town,and grow up in it.But the most beautiful place is the surroundings . Zhangjiajie is a famous attraction in my country even outside our nation.If you want some unforgettable landscape or experience,you have to go there and see it. The mountains are steer and strange.They cross the cloud and if climb to the top you will see the most beautiful sunrise in the world because you are watching above the cloud. The beautiful scenery will take your breath away.You can't miss it.