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如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者词汇表达不够丰富，在单词拼写方面也要继续努力；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Dear Mike, The computer is bad for our helth experically for the eyes. I think you should give up to play computer games and do some sport after class.I think you will be interested in sport,and I will play with you. I think you should study hard.If you have something mistakes,I will help you to solve this program.Also you can ask the teachers for help when you are making mistakes. Everyone will help your if you are giving up the computer!
