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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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From the chart,i can see that one's income depends on his or her degree of education in some ways.If you can get more chances to further your study,it means that you can get more salaries in future. Maybe someone will be unhappy hearing these,they may think it is not real that only educational people can get good earning,get employment.They hold opinions that they can also get lots of money through some ways.As you know ,more and more people can get much money by physical labour.But in the meantime,you have to know that it would be so tired of to do these jobs. It is a reality problem,if you want to get well-paid job,the degree of education is very important.Therefore, we should concentrate more on education.As you know,cultural is the root of a country. In case of this,whatever it is a person or a nation,education should be the top of the tasks we should focus in future.

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