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I have a good friend.He's name is Wang Qun. He has two big eyes and big noise.He like playing badminten and basketball. Right now.He is living in wuhan.Two mouth later.I will to see him.I think he will be happy to i see him. I telled him use phone.Then we say "good by" for eath other.