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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear Sir: During Dec.15 to Dec.22 at the exhibition in New York,I have learned the new item 5670 of your company and am very interested in it.Our company is one of the largest Store company in Asia,we purchase lots of this kinds of goods.I hope you can send a price list and instruction to me,so we can discuss the possability.Thanking for your cooperation and hoping we can establish business relastionship. best regards HuBin
