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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear Sir: During Dec.15 to Dec.22 at the exhibition in New York,I have learned the new item 5670 f your company and am very interested in it.Our company is one of the largest store company in Asia,we purchase lots of this kinds of goods.I hope you can send a price list and instruction to me,so we can discuss the possibility of order.Thanking for your cooperation and hoping we can establish business relationship. Best regards HuBin
