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字数：300 满分：100分
句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达多样性要提高，单词拼写方面还要继续努力；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
Too Later The plane was late and detectives were waiting at the airport all morning.They were exciting a valuable parcle of diamonds. A few hours earlier, someone had told the polic that thieves wound try to steal the diamonds. When the plane arrived. Two detectives were waiting inside of the main building while others were waiting on the airfield. Two men stood the parcle off the plane and carried it into Customes House. Two detectives were keeping guard at the door. Two detectives opened the parcle. To their surprise, they found the parcle full of stones and sand.
