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字数：300 满分：100分
句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
Too Later The plane was late and detectives were waiting at the airport all morning.They were expecting a valuable parcel of diamonds. A few hours earlier, someone had told the police that thieves would try to steal the diamonds. When the plane arrived. Two detectives were waiting inside of the main building while others were waiting on the airfield. Two men stood the parcel off the plane and carried it into Customes House. Two detectives were keeping guard at the door. Two detectives opened the parcle. To their surprise, they found the parcel full of stones and sand.
