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The best and the worst. Joe Stander has the most beautiful garden in our town.Nearly everyone enters for "The Nicest garden competition" every year,Joe wins every time. Bill Frith's garden is larger than Joe's. Bill works harder than Joe and grows more flows and vegetables,but Joe's garden is more interesting. He has made neat paths and built a woolen bridge over a pool. I like the garden too, but I do not hard work. Every year I enter for the competition too, and I always win a little prize for the worst garden in the town.
