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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33536
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分42.5分
评语:

正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Perch Buttons. I have just moved to a house in bridge street. Yesterday a begger knocked at my door. He asked me for a meal and a glass of beer. In return for this, he stood on his head and sang songs. I gave him a meal. He ate the meal and drunk the beer. Then he put a piece of cheese in his pocket and went away. The neighbour told me about him. Everybody knows him. His name is Perch Buttons. He called at every house once month and asks for a meal and a glass of beer.

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