Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
字数:300 满分:100分
正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Perch Buttons. I have just moved to a house in bridge street. Yesterday a begger knocked at my door. He asked me for a meal and a glass of beer. In return for this, he stood on his head and sang songs. I gave him a meal. He ate the meal and drunk the beer. Then he put a piece of cheese in his pocket and went away. The neighbour told me about him. Everybody knows him. His name is Perch Buttons. He called at every house once month and asks for a meal and a glass of beer.