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No wrong numbers. Mr.Jams has a garage in Slibry and now he has just bought another garage in Perhurst. Perhurst is only five miles from Slibry, but Mr. Jams cannot get a telephone for his new garage. So he has just bought twelve pigones. Yesterday a pigone carried the first message from Perhurst to Slibry. The bird covered the distance in three minutes. Up to now, he has sent a grent many requests for spare parts and other urgen messages from one garage to the other. In this way, Mr.Jams begun his own private 'telephone' service.
