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2007年专八英语作文真题:经济差距影响友谊

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要求：: 题目 Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship.
说明 Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship. What do you think?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数：300满分：100分

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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

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An exciting trip. I have just received a letter from my brother. Tim. He is in Australia. He has been there for six month. Tim is an enganeer. He is working for big firm and has already visited a great number of different places in Australia. He has just bought an Australian car and has gone to the Alice Springs, a small town in the centre of the Australia. He will soon visit Darlwn. From there, He will fly to Perth. My brother has never been aboard before. so he is finding this trip very exciting.

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