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Will E-books Replace Traditional Books With the development of the technology ,more and more E-books are become popolar.Different opinions vary from individual to individual .The reasons are as follows. On the one hand,human think e-books will replace traditions books by saving the time.It is advantage for E-books which people could read e-books at any place at any time .It is more convenient to portable,which a pot people are very pleased with. On the other hand ,people think it is impossible for E-books will replace tradition books .Firstly ,every day you faced with the screen of computer or mobile phone makes you eye sight more and more poor. Secondly,E-books cant express some sprite that some wonderful things such as respect or love in the traditional books.So it is essential for traditional books to exisit. From my perspection,e-books will not replace traditional books .Beacuse traditions are really difficulty to change which is rooted in ours heart .whatever you choose you should makes full use of it .It is high time that we could catch the chance to use it .