文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Please send me a card. Postcard always spoil my holidays. Last summer, I went to Italy. I visited museums and sat in gardens. A friendly waiter taught me a few words of Italin.Then he lent me a book. I read a few lines, but I did not understand a word. Every day I thought about the postcard. My holidays passed quickly. On the last day I made a big decision. I got up very early and bought thirty-seven cards. I spent a whole day in my room, but I did not write a single card.