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2007年专八英语作文真题:经济差距影响友谊

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:14浏览次数:4223
要求:
题目 Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship.
说明 Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship. What do you think?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分52.0分
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Please send me a card. Postcard always spoil my holidays. Last summer, I went to Italy. I visited museums and sat in gardens. A friendly waiter taught me a few words of Italin.Then he lent me a book. I read a few lines, but I did not understand a word. Every day I thought about the postcard. My holidays passed quickly. On the last day I made a big decision. I got up very early and bought thirty-seven cards. I spent a whole day in my room, but I did not write a single card.

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