小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；把握下长难句在文中的分布；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Beautiful and nice, always has a smile on her face, that's my good friend, Lily. She is always here by my side when I am in trouble. She brings me so much happiness. When I am upset, she encourages me; when I am lazy, she criticizes me. Now we are not in the same country, we still try to contact each other. I miss her so much, I want her to come back. When I turn back, she is here, waiting for me.