牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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this week,I went to the beijing wild animal's zoo.there were a lot of people who fed monkeys and played with tigers. this was a magical image which people get along animals friendly and kindly.we should be kind with animals like friend.of course,it's important to protest environment. no pick no throw trash in zoo.i had perfect time in there.i learned the importance of protesting wild animals.when we do this,we also protest ourselves.