Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
With the development of the technology,more and more people are addicated in the use of mobile phone,causing a series of increasing social problems.Taking crossing the street as an example,they are crossing the street looking at their cell phones rather than focus on the traffic lights or two sides'cars.What is worse,someone uses walking sticks in order to see the mobile's screen.
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