2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

可适当增加学术词汇的使用量；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

With the development of the technology,more and more people are addicated in the use of mobile phone,causing a series of increasing social problems. Taking crossing the street as an example,they are crossing the street looking at their cell phones rather than focus on the traffic lights or two sides'cars.What is worse,someone uses walking sticks in order to see the mobile's screen.According a survey,about hundreds of people died of traffic accident per day. It is so miserable to see that intelligent sophisticated object invented by people leads to such a mad world,making so many traffic accidents.Maybe many people feel sorry hearing the news,but it is real.Therefore,i just want to say ,please cherish your life ,do not be so crazy with your mobile phone.