小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. His name is Lilei. He is a good boy. The color of his eyes is blue so that they are very beautiful. His hair is brown. He is an enthusiastic person. He likes to help everyone whenever and whatever it is. He likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. our classmates like her very much.