单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
My teacher is a good man. He teaches us English. He has two big eyes, two big ears and a not big and not small nose. He always ware a white shit and a black coat. My teacher is a extremely interested man. He always brings us so much enjoyment on the classroom that we all like him.