小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog. I call it dudu. Dudu is very fat. He is nine years old in this year. He has two big eyes and two small ears. His mouth is short. My dog is very beautiful. My dog is very naughty. Every time when I come home, he will be witting me at the door. I like my dog very much. Do you like it?