小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

A picture is on my table. People in the picture is Jime's family. The man is Jime's father. A woman who is behind the man is Jime's mother. They are all teachers who teach us English and mathematics. There is a beautiful girl who is Jime's sister. She is a student in a primary school.