一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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February, 7, 2015, Saturday, fine Today, I get up early in the morning. After breakfast, I help my mother with housework. Then I do my homework. It is so interesting that I do it well. After finishing my homework, I play table tennis with my best friend Lilei. On evening, I watch TV with my parents. Before sleeping, I prepare for my lesion. What a busy day!