单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
February, 7, 2015, Saturday, fine Today, I got up early in the morning. After breakfast, I helped my mother with housework. Then I did my homework. It was so interesting that I did it well. After finishing my homework, I played table tennis with my best friend Lilei. In the evening, I watched TV with my parents. Before sleeping, I prepare myself for my next day's lesson. What a busy day!