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I have a goodfriend ,She is name is guoxuefei,She is a goodgirl ,I love she is verymuch .And we are same old girl.Sheis love me, too.We sometimego shopping ,And we talk an four times a week,She say I am very good .We play the games evey day. We are good friend.