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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.I can not agree more about this point .If you spend you valuable time on something that only will spoil you now or late,you will find life is boring and when you died ,you left nothing. I firmly believe if you want to be someone,you must pay tears or sweats then you can get sweets.Regarding "no pains,no gains"as my motto,I work hard to pursue my dream being a good person in social contribution.As I am a student now,my main assignment is to study hard gaining more knowledge.I think my determination making my life meaningful. No one can have a second life ,so treasure your life and don't waste it to something useless.Making your life more meaningful is not a easy thing but you should try your best.
