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my best friend is Chen Xing.She is taller than me.And I think she is beautiful.She like eating and drinking.So she is heavy.She like playing basketball and singing.We always play together.She is strong.A lot of boys love her.She also is more outgoing than me.I like her very much.I think we will together for ever.