题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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1.对这种做法有人表示支持文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Should parents send their kids to art classes. Different parents have different opinions. Some people support it and see it as a beneficial thing for kids to attend art classes. There the innocents get a chance to expand their interesting. Perhaps more importantly, they can arm themselves with art skills that maybe helpful for them someday. Others, however, have differently opinion. Children, in these people's eyes, should be given more time to enjoy their childhood and do what they are interested in. Too many extra curriculums chosen by their parents will eliminate their nature. Just as the saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. In my opinion, parents send their children to art classes is a double-edge sword.If their kids too small to be send to art classes, they will dislike the art and misunderstand the art.
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