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①温州是一个美丽的城市，位于中国的东部（in eastern China），气候温暖（warm）, 准备轻便的衣服。（light clothes）②有很多美丽的风景，比如雁荡山（Yandang Moutains）和南麂岛（Nanji Island）等。③ 靠近大海，可以品尝海鲜（seafood）④交通方便⑤这里的人很友好,并且你很愿意做她的导游。
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Dear Nancy， Hello，Nancy. I am May ,how are you ? Last time you told me that you come to Wenzhou next year. So, i talk you something about WenZhou. WenZhou is abig and very beautiful city.WenZhou is in eastern China.It is warm,so when you go to the WenZhou you should wear light clothes. And there are many scenic spots in Wenzhou.As Yandang Moutains,NanJi Island,and so on . As you hungry, You don't have to worry. WenZhou is next to the sea,you can eat many seafood. If you get lost when traveling，there are many people . They are friendly. I hope you have a good trip！ Yours May
