- 分享到:
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章词汇表达丰富，不过请增加学术词汇的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
My good friend is Mei. She’s a girl. She is my classmate. Mei is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer. Because she can swim in the summer holiday. She likes pink and white. She is in Class Four, Grade Six with me. She usually goes to school by motor cycle. Sometimes she goes to school on foot. We often go shopping together on the weekend. We will be good friends forever. My Good Friend I have a good friend.She is my classmate,her name is Tracy.She is a pretty girl. She studies in Tiandong No.2 Middle school,she is in Class 1,Grade 1.She studies hard all day.And she can speaks Japanese English and Chinese very well.So she often help my English and Japanese.I thank you for her help. And I help her math, too.Because my math is very good. We learn from each other and help each other. Tracy often in a white T-shirt and a black skirt.We are all think shi is a lovely girl.And Tracy likes sports very much. She likes playing basketball,bassball,ping-pongball and badminton very much. So we are often play them. Tracy has a big famili,there are nine people in her family.They are her mother,her father,her brother sister,her uncle,her aunt,her grandparents ang her.She loves her family very much. My good friend My name is Michelle. In my class, there is a girl. She has a round face, a small nose, two big eyes, a small mouth and two big ears. Her eyes look like grapes. Her hair is short and black. She is tall and beautiful. She looks like a middle school student. Do you know who is she? Yes, she is Fanny, one of my good friends. Fanny is a good girl at school. In class, she listens to her teachers carefully. She studies English very well. She often helps us to solve problems. She is very quiet, sometimes she is very active. When class is over, she goes out of the classroom to play games with her classmates. She is very friendly to them. She is a good girl at home, too. After supper, she always helps her mother clean the room. Then she watches TV for a short time if mother permits. She seems to have a special interest in music. Any time she hears the music, she will dance. Though she dances badly, she still loses herself in the music. I think she will be a dancer in the future. But she wants to be a writer. This is my good friend. We feel happy when we are together. What about your good friend? Can you tell me something about your good friend?
