小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i have a good friend .his name is jack.he is cute,and treat me well.he likes play bassball.he also like watch tv,riding books,dancing .he always get the gole in the txt .he has blue eyes ,he always dress up clear .we usually walk toghter.he he adot a dog ,he bring it throughin the afternoon.he is my best friend .