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in rencent years ,a wave of tv programes sweep over the whole socirty.with the tv program4es having become an dispensable part of modern people,s life,watching tv enjoys great popularity,especially among yong people. this has lead to a hearted argument as to whether is is wise to watch it. wacting tv can ask for informational easily and acquire knowledge and broaden theor mind .and can relieve people their stress in life.modern people arec likely to suffer from various pressure .they claim that they feel it relaxing to watch tv soe pople think that it had bad effect on us ,it will imnfluence our eyesights and delay learning. clearly,as long as people are sensible and try to avoid long time watching tv .all in all, if everyone realize and we will have bright future and lead a happily life