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题目要求：
Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following three:
1. All costs are paid by the government.
2. All costs are paid by the student.
3. All costs are paid by the student using loans from the government that must be repaid after graduation. Discuss the benefits of each option. Which is the best one?
题目讲解：
语料库：
1. the higher education = college education 高等教育
2. the students’ loans = educational loans 学生贷款
3. work one’s way through college 半工半读
4. apply for the scholarship 申请奖学金
5. potential risk of refusing to repaying the loans 拒绝还款的风险
6. impose much pressure upon a nation economically 增加了政府的经济压力
7. come from the remote rural areas
8. subsidize = sponsor = finance 资助
9. economic support 经济支持
10. finish college education 完成高等教育
11. resolve more pressing social issues 解决更加紧迫的民生问题
12. stimulate one’s study motivation under the pressure of …… 在压力下激发学习动力
13. cherish the learning opportunities 珍惜学习的机会
14. face the risk of dropping out of school 面对辍学的风险
15. embark on part-timers 做兼职工作
适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；词汇表达丰富度要注意，不过单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
the issue whether the higher education can be founded in goverment or the student themselves has raised hot debat.some socicoogists think the students themnself sgould paid the all cosyts,whereas others hold that the goverments paid the cost undeniably, there are pooints in both sides of the arguments. there is no dobut that it is signifiicant for the students paid the tuition by themselves. but if they come from the poor families they can,t have enough money to pay for it.it meaning if they reading they have to do work at the maintime.they will face the risk of learning opportunity and could,t finish college education.it is good idear for students if they using loans from the goverments that must be repaired after gradition.the students,s loans may be the best choice they can apply for the scholaeship amnd cherish the learning opptunity.
