小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；运用了丰富的复杂句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

my good friend her name is shirley she has two big bright eyes,she has a short hair,she is a very nice lady she always help me on the raining day she drove her car picked up me went to school, in the class i had questions always ask her she help me finished this questions. she has two boys she worked at restaurant on weekend.she did a lot of housework but she always smile so not feeling tired