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Frank邀请Ａlice参加他这周日的生日宴会，但Alice的父母不在家要到下个月回来，奶奶又卧病在床，需要人照顾。因此，无法前去参加生日宴会。Alice感到很抱歉，只好写信辞谢。
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Dear Frank, Thank you very much for inventing me to join your birthday party.I am very happy.But I think I can not go to your birthday party.Because my grandma is ill and my parents are not at home.If I go to your birthday party nobody can take care of my grandma.And I plan that I will saty at home and take care of my grandma. I hope you can have a good time.
