2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

Nowadays,mobile phone becomes a essential tool that we can't live without .It's its various functions that attract us a lot.First of all,for those who like taking photos,it can be a camera.So,there is no need buying an expensive camera.Then,if there is any problem you need to ask,you can also surf on the Internet through mobile phone.In addition,it is a caculater,a TV,a note,a music player and so on.However,there are some people who overuse mobile phone.They lose their themselves in games,videos as well as novels.Gradually,they don't talk with their surroundings any more.They are accustomed to such lives.They become alone. Mobile phone is a sword with two sides. We should use it correctly.