小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. Her name is Jane.She has a big nose , long hair and big eyes.She likes playing the piano and drawing pictures.She is a amazing girl, she helps others a lot. Everyone likes her very much. She is often tickled pink with happt things.She loves smiling.When I stay with her, I often smile