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①温州是一个美丽的城市，位于中国的东部（in eastern China），气候温暖（warm）, 准备轻便的衣服。（light clothes）②有很多美丽的风景，比如雁荡山（Yandang Moutains）和南麂岛（Nanji Island）等。③ 靠近大海，可以品尝海鲜（seafood）④交通方便⑤这里的人很友好,并且你很愿意做她的导游。
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Dear Nancy, Thanks for your letter. I’m glad to hear that you are going to travel to Wenzhou. Now I’d like to tell you something about Wenzhou. Wenzhou is in eastern China, and it is a beautiful city where the people are really friendly. There are many famous sights here, such as Yandang Mountains and Nanji Island. You could take a bus, train or plane here. It’s not very cold in winter and not very hot in summer, but I think it’s best to visit here in spring and autumn, because you can only pack light clothes. It’s near the ocean, so you can enjoy the delicious seafood. Also, I’d like to be your tour guide. I hope you’ll have a good time in Wenzhou!
