小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. His name's He Siying.He comes from China.He likes to play computer games.He is twelve years old. He is in Class One,Gread Seven.We are in different schools.He is tall.He has two big black eyes.His hair is short and black.He has long arms and his legs are long,too.I ofen help him with his Chinese.He likes to play football.This is my good friend.