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English is one of the most popular languages in the world now.And in my opinion,it plays a really impotant part in our life.So we should learn English well so that our life will be more convenient.There are several suggestions I have.Firstly,you can memory the words well.Secondly,you had better read English for 30 minutes one day.Thirdly,try to communicate with others in English,which will makes you speak English well.