2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

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With the development of economical, more and more advertisiment flush into our daily life. It is denied that it influence our life deeply and extensively. Although we can not deny the influence which give us, it is also hard to neglect its negative efforts. Firstly, too much advertising disrupt the ordinary life. We offen fail to choose the most needed product which we wanted. Such as, when we was searching for the