单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Yesterday is weekend, and I have done all the housework. The Spring Festival is coming, and everyone are very happy and eager to it. Yesterday I wrapped the window and door, the glass is very clean. I was busy and tired,but I felt happy,because my home become more pretty. I know all works will get their reply.