2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

句式变化较丰富，但文中有句子错误；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

With the development of economical, more and more advertisiment flush into our daily life. It is denied that it influence our life deeply and extensively. Although we can not deny the influence which give us, it is also hard to neglect its negative efforts. Firstly, too much advertising disrupt the ordinary life. We offen fail to choose the most needed product which we wanted. Such as, when we was watching the television series the same advertising arise serveral times in the 45 minutes which make everyone feel distrubing. Secondly, when we want to find some effitive information about the certain kind disearse, so many hospital were appeared on the querying list, the most important is that so many illegal is doing the advertise which make so many people lost their money and life. Thirdly, there are some advertising which many people feel tereble.