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My favorite sport Playing football is my favorite sport,because it is very happy thing.One day,l am go to home with find a football by accident,it can be said with certainty that my is fall with football.Then my friend and l going to play football in the square.Finally l often go to match with my classmate homo is my favorite sport star,he is life in britain.He was born in britain,l want to be a professional football player, because play football is very nice sport.From my point of view,it would be better if play football is very good sport.